http://notanoptimist.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] notanoptimist.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] beliefovermisery 2006-05-22 07:52 am (UTC)

This was different. This was wrong.

He watched her slide, felt his arm give around her. He remembered it being tight, holding her close, clinging to the ice himself with one hand, but she slipped.

He watched her slide...

But didn't reach.

The part that knew it was a dream screamed in his mind, but really... he watched her slide into the ice, the freezing cold... he watched...
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